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The Dare (Friday Fictioneers)

October 9, 2015



It was hot, so hot. The noise was excruciating. Screams and shouts calling for god and help and mommys.

The sun was spinning… No… not the sun. I was.

Up and down, around and around, faster and faster. I shouldn’t have done this. I shouldn’t have taken the dare. I know I’m not a fraidy cat, so why did I need to prove it to them? I don’t even like them.

Up and down. Up and down.

It’s just— I ate that hotdog. Candy floss, and the burger. Oh and that giant cup of cola.

Up and down.

Oh no!


This is a Friday Fictioneers Prompt


Word Count: 100



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  1. micklively permalink

    Centrifugal force will take it away.
    Good piece.

  2. Oh..the regret as we spin …you have captured that well. Nicely done.

  3. For once, I know what happened next!!!! LOL Ugh, that’s the worst feeling in the world! Another wonderful take on the Friday prompt.

  4. Hahaha! That leaves much to the imagination. Much vomit that is. LOL!

  5. gahlearner permalink

    Gulp. Good story. Makes me slightly queasy though. 😉

  6. Oh, yes! I feel slightly sick reading this. So, great job!! What we do to try to fit in or please others.

  7. Dear Solo,

    Thank you for not including the gory details, although I can feel them coming up. Well done.



  8. Yuk. I feel for those standing underneath and watching!

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