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Last note (Friday Fictioneers)

January 22, 2016


Music flowed down the length of the hall to where I stood. The notes were hesitant at first, as though the musician was uncertain. Slowly a song formed, caressing my senses with a lover’s touch. Then the voice joined the notes. Crystal clear, soaring high above the piano’s song as if reaching up to touch the stars.

I began to distinguish words. Fears and loves, hopes and desires burst forth from the singer sending shivers down my spine.

I was transfixed until the last note died away.

Heart full, I left before she saw that I had trespassed.


This is a Friday Fictioneers Prompt

Word count: 98


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  1. Dear Laurie,

    Lovely piece. I loved the tone and mood of this.



  2. Music can touch you so deeply.

  3. Beautiful ending. Well done.

  4. This is a beautiful scene. The description is vivid and sensual. Great writing.

  5. Love this one! I could feel the sense of being swept up in the moment! Great job!

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