Endings and beginnings (Friday Fictioneers)
Darkness falls quickly.
On the last night of the year a silence could be felt that was unusual in its intensity. No drunken screams, no shouts or cheers. Just silence. Waiting, breathless, hopeless. A countdown of shadows and death.
As the ball falls, lights flash and heat bursting colorful explosions fill the air. As one we breathe in and release a huge sigh. It’s over.
Chatter begins. Simple soft words filled with emotion and sentiment travel the airwaves. Love is a feeling of warmth. We smile at one another. A new year begins. A new dawn. A new hope…
FUCK YOU 2016
May the force be with you.
This is a Friday Fictioneers prompt
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Dear Laurie,
I raise my glass and toast the new year with you. Love your descriptions and buildup to the last line. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle
Cheers !! 🍸🍷🍾🍹☕️
Great final sentiment left me laughing. Have a good New Year
Happy new year Michael!
Happy new year, I hope next year will better.
Me too! Happy new year Bjorn
2016 has been particularly harsh with who it has taken! Loved this. 🙂
Thank you Clare! Happy new year!
Ha ha ha. Happy New Year, Laurie.
Happy new year John!
🙂
New hope.
I hope 2017 is a better year for you.
Tracey
I know one or two people who would echo those sentiments. Happy New Year!
Happy new year Sandra!
Waiting, breathless, hopeless I fear this is how many are feeling about 2017. Happy New Year!
Happy new year Alicia!!
What a great description… all to end with a guffaw! Loved this, Laurie!
Thank you Dale! Happy new year!
Some years are just almost unbearable. Hope 2017 is better. Happy new year.
Happy new year Michael
You captured the general sentiment about 2016 well. Happy 2017 🙂
Thank you! Happy New Years