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What hides inside (Friday Fictioneers)

May 17, 2018

Photographer prefers to remain anonymous.

 

They sit, bereft, waiting… they’re full of spiders who have made homes inside the dark enclosed stinky places. I think there might even be a mouse. I’m sure I’ve heard it, or maybe little imps, or gnomes?

Its winter and cold outside. The dog avoids those boots like there’s a snake inside.

Hmmm, no… probably not.

Grandpa comes up every summer.

Whatever’s in there will need to find a new home then, because Grandpa won’t think twice about sweeping them out. The image of homeless pixies plays on my mind.

Tomorrow I’ll take out the broken birdhouse. Doll blankets too.

 

 

This is a Friday Fictioneers Prompt

Word Count:100

 


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39 Comments
  1. A sweet tale

  2. Such a caring nature, sweet 🙂

  3. Loved it.. I can see the little pixies and spiders! ❤

  4. Excellent, Laurie. Pixies indeed.

  5. I’m smiling. I love your take on these boots. It seems everyone found something magical about these boots this week.
    Tracey

  6. Cute take, I’m sure the pixies will welcome the blankets

  7. Dear Laurie,

    I could see the pixies. Imaginative take on the prompt.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  8. Awww, who wouldn’t love having pixies in their boots!

  9. That was lovely – I really enjoyed reading it: so visual!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

  10. That child has a vivid imagination!

  11. Oh poor little creatures… you have to find a new home for them… how about snakes and scorpions?

    • Hmmmmm yeah I don’t think I want to find a new home for snakes and scorpions! They can stay there

  12. Great little tale with lots of heart!

  13. I just love the imaginations of children… Lovely take, Laurie.

  14. Such a wonderful imagination and well written! Nicely done!

  15. I love the voice in your story.

  16. Love what use those boots have been put to whole Grandpa’s been a way. Such an imagination both you and your narrator have.

    • Thank you Sarah… well without looking it could be anything… especially in Australia! 🤤😲

  17. Pixie blankets! I love that idea! Very dear story, this.

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