All aboard (Friday Fictioneers)
Tourists were the same universe over. Loud, rude, obnoxious… One and the same really. Inappropriate behaviour, too much alcohol and parties long into the night.
On this one planet, the locals had had enough.
The automatic hoverbus took the diversion as signposted and was not seen again.
As did the next.
And the next.
Not many travelled to New Shangri-la anymore.
Hardly surprising.
Lot of divorced singles. Well… they didn’t know they would shortly be divorced… or missing…
That was the thing about New Shangri-la. You didn’t know you were going there… until you were not there anymore.
Holiday anyone?
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Rambles, writing and amusing musings 
I sensed a kind of smug revenge and, well, envy. I know a lot of people who deserve to take your holiday – how do I sign them up?
Haha indeed James… the list is as long as my arms muahaha
So that’s what dark matter is! Fun tale, Laurie
Oh I love that thought. All that dark matter floating around… all that remains of the creepy, the bastards, the cheaters, the wicked… yup, I’m going with that
As long as the black matter doesn’t reconstitute at some point, I’m cool with it 🙂
Um ok that thought gives me nightmares!
lol
I’ll stick to a bit of sun on the beach, thanks!
Hahaha fair enough!
I’ll send a few candidates your way but will stay here, thanks.
Haha yeah I’ve got a few to send too!
Note to self: stay away from your buses. Good story!
That was supposed to be “tour” but I might stay away from your buses as well. 😁
Hilarious because they both work! Hahaha love it. Thanks for reading
Haha haha I actually love the other message.
I’m cancelling my booking right now!
Here’s mine!
Hahaha
Ha ha, only you could make such a chilling story sound so cheery!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
Haha oh yes, sorry bout that
I think the New Shangra-la’ians accomplished their desired effect. No more tourists! I know I would go. Note to self: Don’t be too annoying when I travel. =) Fun story!
Ooops, I meant “I wouldn’t go!” haha
Haha still love the thought
Hahaha thanks, Brenda. 😊
Dear Laurie,
The beach or a camp out in the woods are sounding better all the time. 😉 good one,
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hahaha I think I’d prefer a hotel with working bathroom ! 😘
Laurie, I think your muse and mine were in cahoots this week 🙂
Hahaha thanks !