What does it take (Friday Fictioneers)

PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox
The tribute was colorful and heartbreaking. The stuffed toys of children passed. Ears fluttering in the warm breeze. The monsters take the children. Tributes pinned to the line in the hopes that the household would be spared. Nearly every household was affected. And still the monsters came. Night after night, stealing in with the shadows, taking.
Taking.
Taking.
The red-rimmed eyed women met in secret. No more, they swore. They took up arms and waited in the shadows. No more, they swore.
The battle was bloody. The dark hid their sins. Many died.
Their desperation won.
But still, they wept.
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Word Count: 100
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Wow! Laurie, you packed 100,000 words into this 100!
Thank you so so much, Neil! That is the best compliment I could get I think. ❤
I would say this is a Christmas story relating to Krampus from Alpine Folklore.
Great story, for naughty children.
Thanks James!
Oh my! That was an unexpected ride into terror and back again! Well done!
Thank you! 😊
Ditto Neil! A novel packed in those simple lines. *shiver*
Thank you so much!
Great story, Laurie. It was easy to imagine all the way through. 🙂
Thanks Bill
Wow, that was an emotional rollercoaster with a victory but still so incredibly sad. The red-rimmed eyed women are such a strong image.
Thank you so much!!
So much illustrated in so few word, brilliant
Thank you, Michael
Wow, that was a powerful story so well told. Excellent!
Thank you so much!
I have to agree that you packed quite a wallop with this one! Wonderful imagery!
Thank you so much
🙂
Dear Laurie,
Heartbreakig and frighteningly well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Laurie, you describe a place I hope never to find myself in. Very creative writing.
Thank you! Me too.
You’re very welcome.